Your advices of gold will never get old
( poem by my elder son Pritish)
Those deep thinking eyes
I will never see
The stern but soft voice
Will never be heard.
Oh! Those fruitful discussions
We won't have any
I have seen greats
But like you, I've not seen any.
You old wise brigadier
I'll remember you always
Your eyes in mine, and your voice in my ears.
Your loss is difficult to bear
But your thoughts will stay with me
Forever.
It will be hard to let you go,
My friend ! Harder it will be to forget
Your smile in the end.
Your advice of gold
Will never get old.
You are gone but you left your ideas
And traits you wore.
Your presence will never be absent,
but Home and my heart aren't the same anymore.
Beautifully penned down, Lily!
जवाब देंहटाएंThankx mercury info... this poem is penned down by my son pritish..
हटाएंThankx mercury info... this poem is penned down by my son pritish..
हटाएंPritish have ability to express the feelings in appropriate words. The way he has depicted his great grandfather that is very impressive. How smoothly he has touched the heart of his grandfather. God bless the departed soul.
जवाब देंहटाएंThankyou dhirendra ji..
हटाएंThankyou dhirendra ji..
हटाएंPritish have ability to express the feelings in appropriate words. The way he has depicted his great grandfather that is very impressive. How smoothly he has touched the heart of his grandfather. God bless the departed soul.
जवाब देंहटाएंWow.... while reading it goes straight into the heart. God bless u Pritish.
जवाब देंहटाएंThankx sangeeta😊
हटाएंThankx sangeeta😊
हटाएंWow.... while reading it goes straight into the heart. God bless u Pritish.
जवाब देंहटाएंI remember how Mayank drew the card to express his feelings when he lost his nana g.. and now Pritish's poem for his dada g. This generation has the guts to express and I appreciate the bond they share with grandparents. Pritish I am so proud of you boy. Be like this forever. You got amazing talent. Keep nurturing it.
जवाब देंहटाएंThankx ritu😊
हटाएंThankx ritu😊
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